I really enjoyed this visit because even though I have eels on our farm, they aren't tame so we can't feed them by hand. Even though the eels were friendly, I couldn't help removing my legs from the water as the eels drew nearer, because our untamed eels have come close to biting me a couple of times. It was very entertaining feeding the eels because it nearly turned into a sort of competition as to who could feed the eels and to get the best spots for feeding them. Inspired by our visit to the Hustlers we wrote a series of poems and haikus to describe our experience.
Here is some of my writing...
Lush harakeke lines the banks,
hiding creatures below the still waters,
branches casting gloom-ridden shadows.
Underneath tranquil water lurks a secret,
awaiting a movement above.
Underneath tranquil waters lurks TIMMY THE TOE MUNCHER!!
(P.S The Timmy The Toe Muncher part would make a lot more sense if you could read my other piece of writing.)
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